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Danielle Vix
hello Everyone!
I just joined this forum and wanted to share my webcomic with you!
hope you like it!
crittics and comments are wellcome!
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Very cute characters!
You have two grammar mistakes, though.
On page 13, "your" should be "your're" at the top right cell.
On page 24, you make the same mistake when she says "since your home"
I look forward to seeing what comes next!
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