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Orgasma (my comic)
Thought I'd post this here and see what kind of reaction it got. This is a comic that I've been working on in Poser. So far, I've got 10 "pages" worth of stuff rendered, but a lot more story in my head.

If someone wants to know more about the theme, then feel free to ask, I'll give plenty of pertinent details. A lot of what I wanted to do is limited somewhat by the availability of good Poser models, and my own meager abilities in Photoshop.

Anyway, here is the cover page to Orgasma: Attack Of The Phorosians.
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Old 07-28-2009, 05:05 AM
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Because there's a max resolution of 1024 pixels wide here, the remaining comic pages are hosted offsite at my ImageFap account. There's a lot of text, and scaling it much smaller than about 1100 wide can get iffy trying to read some of it.

The double-page spread on pages 9 and 10 would also lose a lot of its impact scaled to 1024 wide. So, here's pages 1-5:

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4 5
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Old 07-28-2009, 05:07 AM
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Here are pages 6-10.

There's a lot of words, yes, but as I recall another thread bemoaned the lack of actual plot in many futanari "stories," and I like a good dose of plot in with my hawt futa-sex.

Questions, comments, flames, please post 'em here or PM.

6 7 8

9-10 11

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Old 07-28-2009, 07:03 AM
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I like it, very well composed, well written and story flows
excellently..you have something here.
be sure to get it copyrighted.
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Old 07-28-2009, 08:20 PM
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Interesting, but a bit wordy.

Perhaps less exposition and more visualizing would be better.
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Believe me, I wanted to do more visualizing, but a lot of that is limited by the models I have available to me, as well as my actual skill in posing models w/o a predefined pose already made.

As an example, I wanted to have an image of the Phorosians themselves in there somewhere, but after hunting high and low, I could not find a suitable "insectoid" model to represent them, so I had to leave them off-panel.

The Council Hall scene I had in mind (mentioned at the bottom of page 5) was too complex to try and render in Poser, and while there's an object that could've accomplished what I want people-wise, I was still missing proper scenery for it.

I had a lot in my head I was trying to get out. There's a ton of thematic information that's gone unsaid in this thread.
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Old 07-30-2009, 07:28 PM
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So, what exactly is this "poser" program?
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Poser is a 3D program that takes "models" and allows you to move them around and "pose" them. In general, most of the 3D images here were probably rendered using Poser; there may be some, however, where the creator had experience using programs like 3D Studio Max, Lightwave, or Maya (and sometimes ZBrush) that can build the individual figures and render the scenes, but doing this takes a great deal more time and skill than I have.

I use Poser because it's relatively easy to use, there's literally tons of possibilities for it, and I don't have to try to model the individual figures. Any postwork (adding effects, text, etc) is all done in Photoshop.

The only downside is that you're limited to the figures, clothing, props, and equipment that are made available for Poser, unless you have skill in 3DSMax, Lightwave, Maya, or ZBrush. There's a wide, wide breadth of stuff out there, but nearly all of it is designed for human figures, and even then, an extraordinarily large chunk of it is designed for female human figures.

Anywho: Here's page 12.

What happens when you get sucked into a miniature black hole? Narina's about to find out.


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Page 13: Narina awakens after having been dropped...somewhere...

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Page 14: Where did Narina end up? Somewhere very cold.

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