Page 6 is coming, but there is a snag.

Four days ago, when I started putting together panels for page 6, my computer began shutting itself off spontaneously. It would take anywhere from 20 minutes to 3 hours for this to happen, it was purely random. Initially, I thought the power supply in my computer was dying. I replaced the PSU with one from a friend who was going to use it to build a much more powerful computer on the condition that I buy him a replacement.

Sadly, the PSU wasn't the problem.

The video card in my computer was the culprit; it has officially died (replacing the PSU caused a video initialization error on POST) leaving me without a functioning desktop machine. I have ordered new parts from NewEgg, and I should have them in hand soon (by the end of the week). Hopefully, the rebuild of my system will go smoothly and all will be okay.

...Wish me luck.

My computer is fully back online, and so I ended up redoing page 6 after a little chat with a friend regarding a block I had getting Narina and Elia to the next segment of the story that I had fleshed out.

Page 6: Narina and Elia shake off the haze of realizing just how far they really are from home, and decide to set out to see just what might be on Earth.

Page 7: Narina and Elia check out the base, trying to discern just whom they've come across. Only problem is, they get spotted first...

Page 8:

Narina and Elia get led back to the base by the guard, and are promptly placed in a holding cell (yes, I know, it looks like an office building, but I couldn't find anything that remotely looked like what I wanted it to). After a few hours of waiting, the girls are greeted by General Nichols, the XO of the base, who discovers something he never expected to see on a woman...

Hey, folks.

I've made the decision to stop posting the comic here for a couple of reasons.

First, given that the large majority of replies in this thread are my own, and the view count on the thread is fairly low, it's pretty obvious that there's not a lot of "readership" here, nor is there any real understanding of feedback besides "yes plz moar" (and I realize that a lot of this is spurred by the board's own rules of needing 5 posts to view pictures in the first place). Feedback is important to me, and since I'm getting exactly -zero- from here, it makes no sense to post here.

This, combined with the spam I'm seeing cropping up all over the board makes me wonder just how many people really are even looking, and makes me wonder if there's really even a "community" here.

There are a few other outlets where I'm cross-posting further pages. In essence, if you know where to look for it, you can find it.

If you're genuinely interested in following the path of the comic, feel free to PM me and I'll provide links to the other places I've posted the comic.

its truly well done but it needs more action if you know what i mean ; ] can't w8 for the next pages ^^

I understand, but my entire goal in this was to put together a story that had less of a laser-like focus on sex. Nearly every story I've ever seen has either no plot, or a plot so thin it was pointless, focusing so heavily on sex that there wasn't anything else to it.

In short, if you're going to judge it by the amount of grinding, penetration, and such, I think you're going to be disappointed. Sex is (and will be) a component of the story as it's vital to who Narina is, but there's some setup that has to happen first, and I'm unwilling to sacrifice the quality of the story just to throw in some fucking.

None the less, if you still wish to follow the story, drop me a PM and I'll provide links as to where you can follow it. I'm not planning on posting further pages here.

thank you for the nice post

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